Monday, 2 March 2009

sharkattack (yx)

it was a beautiful sunny day . Tim decided to go out with his brown dog , tom to enjoy . tim decided to go to the beach and spend time with tom , tom's favourite game is catch and run around , so tim decided to play ball with tom on the beach .

The sea was blue and beautiful and birds were flying around . tim brought a ball out and played with tom . He them the bal far , bo that tom would have to run to catch the ball . they enjoyed thier game . tim threw the ball into the sea and hoped that tom would go catch that.. but didenot tom felt sad, tim went into the sea and picked up thr ball . when tim picked up the ball and threw it to tom , tom suddenly barked loudly . suddenry , tim saw a bug blue shack . it near and bit tim's arm, followed by the leg and it ate tim up . tom was sad becasue he could not do anything to help tim. he could only bark . it was sad because it lost tim , tom looked at the sea hoping that tim would be alive .

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